Writing Prompt – “Show, Don’t Tell,” Prompt 03, 04, & 05 – FTM #010

Writing Prompt – “Show, Don’t Tell,” Prompt 03, 04, & 05 – FTM #010

Pa - MrC - Public Material - IMG - MrC Hello! Thin (Transparent)Hello, class! This week, the free teaching material is the third, fourth, and fifth in my series of “Writing Prompts.” I am putting out three this week as an apology for the skipped week of the 7th.  

This week’s writing prompts are designed to help students practice their “showing” skills. Prompt 03 is aimed at getting students used to considering the senses besides sight in their descriptive writing. Prompts 04 is designed to have students practice showing a character’s emotions, rather than simply telling the reader how they feel. This is much like Prompt 01 from several weeks ago, except that I chose the emotion of guilt, which is more complicated to try and show. Prompt 05 is designed to show us a character’s attitude towards something without directly telling the reader. This also works out other skills, like tone.

So, let’s get started!

What it is/What it’s for\How to use it:

First, let me just post in text the three prompts so that you do not have to download the files before you know if you want to use it:

Prompt 03:

When using descriptive writing, it is easy to fall into the habit of only using descriptions of sight. In other words, many novice writers only describe what their characters can see. It is important to remember that the other senses give the reader a lot of valuable and engaging information too! So, for this prompt, you will practice description using the other senses.

Imagine a scene in your mind, it can be anything or anywhere, and imagine a blind character within that scene. You must describe the scene from the blind character’s perspective. That means you must not use any sight descriptions in your writing, but rely entirely on descriptions using the other senses, like touch, temperature, smell, balance, hearing, and taste. Try to use as many different senses as you can, but you must use more than two.

Prompt 04:

“Show, Don’t Tell,” is a technique that can be used to indicate the emotions of a character without having to tell the reader directly how they are feeling. For this writing prompt, we will be practising that technique. Think of a character who is feeling guilty. They can be anywhere, in any situation, and they can be feeling guilty for any reason. Write a scene below in which you show the character feeling that emotion. Be sure not to use the words “guilty,” “bad,” “responsible,” “ashamed,” “conscience,” “remorse,” “sorry,” “regret,” or any other words like those that tell us directly how the character feels. Show it through senses, thoughts, dialogue, and actions!

Prompt 05:

When you show something from a character’s point of view, you are also showing the reader how the character feels about it. For instance, if a character walks into a church and describes it with beautiful descriptions, and acts in a reverent manner, it tells us something about them and the way they react to religious locations. Imagine a character entering a place they have always wanted to go, but had never been able to before. It can be any character and any location. For this writing prompt, use the technique of “Show, Don’t Tell” to show your reader how the character feels about finally visiting this location. Do not use words that tell us directly how the character feels. Show it through senses, thoughts, dialogue, and actions!

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I’ve talked about the importance and use of writing prompts before, but it is always worth remembering. I hope you don’t mind a bit of self-plagiarism, but I feel I described my writing prompts and their uses very well the first time, and so to save you from having to follow a link, I’ll just post it again below:

“Of course writers will know that writing prompts are good for practice, but to be frank, most teachers view them as time fillers – valuable mostly to slip into a schedule when you don’t have anything else prepared. This is an incorrect approach to take with writing prompts. They may be time consuming, but I believe they are an essential part of the writing curriculum for many reasons.

Of course the most obvious purpose for a writing prompt is practice. As much as I love a good presentation or lesson, nothing – and I do mean nothing – is as important in developing writing skills as practice. Writing Prompts, no matter the time window given, give students an opportunity for that practice with just enough structure to focus their efforts, and enough creative freedom for students to feel personal investment in the product of their work.

Short writing prompts – in the five to ten minute range – are great for starting writing class with. They can be on the desk for the students to work on the second they walk in the classroom, which helps with classroom management, but they also help spark creativity, leaving the student revved up and ready to jump into long-form writing projects, or participate in class activities.

Medium writing prompts – in the fifteen to thirty minute range – are best used when paired with other writing steps or activities. For instance, if the students are given a thirty-minute writing prompt, the second half of the period could be used for self-assessment, sharing, or it could see the students trading their writing to practice peer editing or peer conferencing. I like this especially because examining writing is just as important for improvement as the act of writing itself. If you believe in homework, it could also be useful for a light assignment as well.

Long writing prompts would take up a full writing period, and in general I don’t like them very much unless time is planned in a future time period for the students to go over and examine their writing through another context. These sorts of prompts are good for writing assessments before a lesson, as well as post-lesson assessments. I believe there is a danger in using these prompts, however, as it can be tempting to use them to simply fill time by taking up a whole class period so the teacher doesn’t have to plan something more complicated – which is not a great angle to take. I don’t believe they make a good replacement for long term writing projects, and I also believe that extensive homework holds limited returns, so I don’t recommend giving them for homework.

The writing prompts I give have a front and back, but in general I believe they can be used for all three lengths.” … “This could involve writing a single paragraph, or it could be expanded to fill both the back and front of the page, with a little creativity and will. If you’re using my prompts for the short form writing, you should probably only print out the front page, but if you use them for medium or long segments, I would recommend printing both the front and back pages.”  

Pa - MrC - Public Material - Writing Prompt - Show Don't Tell 05 (Dark Printable)

FREE DOWNLOADS:

PDF:

Google Drive: (To Download the Google Drive Files, you will have to click on File and “Download as…” If you use Google Drive a lot, you can also click on “Make a Copy” and modify the file name as you see fit.)

Free Images: Since today doesn’t have new art assets, there are no free images this week. Sorry!

I hope you find these materials useful! If you do, and you want to help me keep making free materials for you and teachers around the world, please support me at My Patreon!

Have a great day, and DFTBA!

Sincerely,

     – Mr. Edward L. Cheever II

P.S. – DFTBA = “Don’t Forget to be Awesome!”

P.P.S. – All materials are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution -Non-Commercial – ShareAlike (CC-BY-NC-SA) License.

“How to use ‘Show, Don’t Tell’ Effectively” Presentation – “Show, Don’t Tell” Part 03 – FTM #009

“How to use ‘Show, Don’t Tell’ Effectively” Presentation – “Show, Don’t Tell” Part 03 – FTM #009

Pa - MrC - Public Material - IMG - MrC Hello! Thin (Transparent)Hello, class! It’s been all too long since my last post. For those of you who don’t know, I run this blog on the side of the other things I do, and so life occasionally steps in the way and prevents me from getting these things out in a timely manner. Do not worry, though! I will make it up to you with next week’s post which will include three different writing prompts instead of the usual one.

Today, at last, we explore the final presentation on the topic of “Show, Don’t Tell.” Just to recap really quickly, the first presentation I posted on the subject was an introducing the concept. The second presentation talked about when and why to use “Showing” or “Telling.” Today’s post is about how to use “Show, Don’t Tell” in your writing. It will cover the questions of “What tools do I use to ‘show’ my writing?” and “How do I get those tools if I don’t have them?”

If you don’t want or need to read the rest of this post and want to get straight to the downloads, just scroll on down to the bottom where I keep all of the links!

Well, let’s get started!

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Writing Prompt – “Show, Don’t Tell,” 02 – FTM #008

Writing Prompt – “Show, Don’t Tell,” 02 – FTM #008

Hello, class! This week, the free teaching material is the second in my series of “Writing Prompts.” As I said two weeks ago, these writing prompts will come out every other week so I can keep the quality of my other free materials up. If you’re looking forward to the third (and I believe final) part of the “Show, Don’t Tell” presentation is coming next week, so stay tuned!

This week’s writing prompt was specifically designed to help students practice the skill I described in the second part of the “Show Don’t Tell” presentation, which I will link to HERE. I felt that a writing prompt on the topic I covered just last week would be appropriate and timely.

Let’s get started!

Pa - MrC - Public Material - Writing Prompt - Show Don't Tell 02 (Dark Printable)

What it is/What it’s for\How to use it:

I’ve talked about the importance and use of writing prompts before, but it is always worth remembering. I hope you don’t mind a bit of self-plagiarism, but I feel I described my writing prompts and their uses very well the first time, and so to save you from having to follow a link, I’ll just post it again below:

“Of course writers will know that writing prompts are good for practice, but to be frank, most teachers view them as time fillers – valuable mostly to slip into a schedule when you don’t have anything else prepared. This is an incorrect approach to take with writing prompts. They may be time consuming, but I believe they are an essential part of the writing curriculum for many reasons.

Of course the most obvious purpose for a writing prompt is practice. As much as I love a good presentation or lesson, nothing – and I do mean nothing – is as important in developing writing skills as practice. Writing Prompts, no matter the time window given, give students an opportunity for that practice with just enough structure to focus their efforts, and enough creative freedom for students to feel personal investment in the product of their work.

Short writing prompts – in the five to ten minute range – are great for starting writing class with. They can be on the desk for the students to work on the second they walk in the classroom, which helps with classroom management, but they also help spark creativity, leaving the student revved up and ready to jump into long-form writing projects, or participate in class activities.

Medium writing prompts – in the fifteen to thirty minute range – are best used when paired with other writing steps or activities. For instance, if the students are given a thirty-minute writing prompt, the second half of the period could be used for self-assessment, sharing, or it could see the students trading their writing to practice peer editing or peer conferencing. I like this especially because examining writing is just as important for improvement as the act of writing itself. If you believe in homework, it could also be useful for a light assignment as well.

Long writing prompts would take up a full writing period, and in general I don’t like them very much unless time is planned in a future time period for the students to go over and examine their writing through another context. These sorts of prompts are good for writing assessments before a lesson, as well as post-lesson assessments. I believe there is a danger in using these prompts, however, as it can be tempting to use them to simply fill time by taking up a whole class period so the teacher doesn’t have to plan something more complicated – which is not a great angle to take. I don’t believe they make a good replacement for long term writing projects, and I also believe that extensive homework holds limited returns, so I don’t recommend giving them for homework.

The writing prompts I give have a front and back, but in general I believe they can be used for all three lengths.” … “This could involve writing a single paragraph, or it could be expanded to fill both the back and front of the page, with a little creativity and will. If you’re using my prompts for the short form writing, you should probably only print out the front page, but if you use them for medium or long segments, I would recommend printing both the front and back pages.”  

Pa - MrC - Public Material - Writing Prompt - Show Don't Tell 02 (Dark Printable) (1)

FREE DOWNLOADS:

PDF:

Google Drive: (To Download the Google Drive Files, you will have to click on File and “Download as…” If you use Google Drive a lot, you can also click on “Make a Copy” and modify the file name as you see fit.)

Free Images: Since today doesn’t have new art assets, there are no free images this week. Sorry!

I hope you find these materials useful! If you do, and you want to help me keep making free materials for you and teachers around the world, please support me at My Patreon!

Have a great day, and DFTBA!

Sincerely,

     – Mr. Edward L. Cheever II

 

P.S. – DFTBA = “Don’t Forget to be Awesome!”

P.P.S. – All materials are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution -Non-Commercial – ShareAlike (CC-BY-NC-SA) License.

 

“Should I Tell or Should I Show” Presentation, “Show, Don’t Tell” Part 02 – FTM #007

“Should I Tell or Should I Show” Presentation, “Show, Don’t Tell” Part 02 – FTM #007

Hello, class! The more I explore the topic of “Show, Don’t Tell,” the more I realize I need to expand my presentations! There are a lot of different aspects of the concept that are worth covering. The first presentation I posted on the subject was all about introducing the concept. Today’s post was supposed to be about how to effectively use “Show, Don’t Tell” in your writing, but I realized there is a subject that should also be covered when we talk about incorporating “Show, Don’t Tell” into your writing – that is, deciding when and how to incorporate it.

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So, this week’s free material is the second in a series of three presentations on “Show, Don’t Tell.” It will cover the question of “When should I tell, and when should I show?” The next time I post a presentation will be part three of this series, finally covering how to use “Show, Don’t Tell,” in your writing.

Well, let’s get started!

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Writing Prompt – “Show, Don’t Tell,” 01 – FTM #006

Writing Prompt – “Show, Don’t Tell,” 01 – FTM #006

 

Pa - MrC - Public Material - IMG - MrC Hello! Thin (Transparent)Hello, class! I hope you’ve been having a great day! The reason this post is coming out
today, Sunday, instead of Friday is because I made a goof. In scheduling the post I accidentally scheduled it like I schedule my reviews on Druidan Media. I realized this too late, and I wasn’t going to reschedule this on Saturday, so here we are on Sunday.

This week, the free teaching material is the first of the “Writing Prompts” that I described in my Patreon as a stretch goal. My goal is still that, at $500 a month, I will put out 4 regular free materials and four writing prompts. However, I wanted to show you what those writing prompts would look like (barring any future redesigns), so I decided I would make a post to that purpose.

My second reason for putting out a Writing Prompt is less happy, however. Since this isn’t a full-time job, or even a part-time job yet, I cannot give it as much time as I would like. I’m keeping myself busy with custodial work, but I need to actively search for a new job that will support me until the day this experiment becomes worth the time I invest in it.

I have fairly high standards for the materials I create here. I want them to be both effective and attractive. That takes time – more than I expected. To keep the quality of my materials up, I need to give myself more time to spread out my work on each material. While a lot of consideration goes into creating a good writing prompt, it’s nothing like that necessary for the ideation the other materials and their art assets.

Because of that, every other week is going to be a writing prompt. This will allow me to keep my promise of four free materials a month, and give me enough time to make the non-writing-prompt materials as good as I want them to be. I hope you guys understand! Of course, if you like what I do and want me to focus entirely on “Mr. Cheever’s Class,” then please support me on my Patreon!

As for what’s coming up next week, don’t worry, the second half of the “Show, Don’t Tell” presentation is still coming! That will come out on Friday, so stay tuned.

Anyway, I believe that writing prompts are a valuable tool in their own right, so, let’s get started!

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Introducing Show Don’t Tell Presentation – FTM #05

Introducing Show Don’t Tell Presentation – FTM #05

Hello, class! First, I’d like to apologize for the tardiness of this free material post. This is the largest piece of material I’ve created so far, in terms of art assets, especially, and it took me longer than normal, and then the fourth of July holiday hit… and here we are! Well, let’s not put it off any further.

Let’s get started!

 

What it is/What it’s Used for:

Last week’s material was a writing exercise for the “show, don’t tell” skill. This week is part 1 of a couple of presentations on the topic that I would show to my students before giving them the exercises. Part 1 is an introductory presentation, and part 2, which I will post for another week sometime in the near future, is about how to do it effectively.

The use for this presentation is fairly plain. It is meant to be a presentation given to a class or group of students by the teacher. I would recommend that if you make Google Doc copies for yourself, that you share the documents with your students after you have presented it to them, so that they can refer to it again if they need to do so.

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Writing Exercise: Show Don’t Tell – FTM #04

Writing Exercise: Show Don’t Tell – FTM #04

 

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Hello, class! So far I’ve been putting out big tools that could be used over and over again throughout a curriculum. However, I’ve always said that I would be putting out all kinds of material, and so this week I’ve got something a bit different.

Let’s get started!

What it is/What it’s Used for:

This material is the first in a series of writing exercises. “Writing Exercise – Show Don’t Tell 01” is a single-use assignment to help strengthen student’s “Show Don’t Tell” skills, which I have found to be universally wanting.  

To be clear, this assignment, and other writing exercises like it are not like the writing prompts that I plan on making if I reach my goals on Patreon. Those prompts will be much more free-form and creative, whereas these writing exercises are very tightly aimed at individual writing skills.

 

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